El haiku es un poema corto japonés, normalmente se escriben en tres versos de 5, 7 y 5 sílabas, sin rima, y es sobre la naturaleza o la vida cotidiana.
Este es mi haiku:
"ENTRE ÁRBOLES Y LADRILLOS
LA GENTE VA ANDANDO,
SIN PARARSE A OBSERVARLOS."
LA GENTE VA ANDANDO,
SIN PARARSE A OBSERVARLOS."
The haiku is a short Japanese poem, it usually written in three lines of 5, 7 and 5 syllables, no rhyme, and is about the nature or daily life.
This is my haiku:
"BETWEEN TREES AND BRICKWORK PEOPLE GO WALKING
WITHOUT STOPPING OBSERVE THEM"
WITHOUT STOPPING OBSERVE THEM"
...you must break THE READER´S HORIZON OF EXPECTATIONS!!!!
ResponderEliminar...still missing your post 1 ( metaphor!!!)...
ResponderEliminarYou have to put a title.
ResponderEliminarYou should update your blog soon, you have to do some posts yet! C'mon Carmen!
ResponderEliminarand the other post????
ResponderEliminarI really like your haiku!! Great job!
ResponderEliminarthe phrases do not have to have relationship... but you have done a good job!!!
ResponderEliminarThe post is very incompleted,you must be a few better...
ResponderEliminarYour haiku is very good, I like it but you can use more colours!!!
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